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Last night I had a dream my youngest son worked as a private detective in Gettysburg.

Inspired, I wrote this in ten minutes:


The Detective, The Dame, The Diamond, and the Dog
by Alan Loewen
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

(Not that anybody in their right mind would steal this stuff, but if you do, I will hunt you down, strap you to a chair, and tell you my Gus the Pus Sucker story)




My name is Loewen, Jared Loewen.

I’m the only private detective in Gettysburg, Pennsylvania and that’s the way I like it ‘cause I like life like I like my coffee: hard, dark, and lonely.

And I’m truly by my lonesome. My one brother is doing undercover work in Sarajevo and the other is running guns in Singapore. My sainted mother lives half a continent away and my old man told his Gus the Pus Sucker story one too many times and is now part of a new concrete bridge support over the Susquehanna.

I do share my office with a parrot; an evil, screaming thing that I call the Death Chicken, but he doesn’t count as company, more like retribution.

She walked into my office and she looked like the way I like ‘em, like my coffee: strong, with a touch of eyeliner. “My diamond brooch is missing,” she said in a pretty little pout, her lower lip stuck out so far I could have used it as a bookshelf. “It’s worth thousands.”

I flipped my fedora on my head. “Hundred dollars a day, babe, with expenses. Starbucks ain’t cheap.”

I chased away the taxi that had brought her and we drove together in my VW Bug. I don’t like driving cars so small I can lick my own knees without so much as stooping, but she was a looker and I didn’t mind her sitting so close I could discern the individual aromas in her perfume. I could tell I had hit the jackpot. This was a dame who shopped at Target and never darkened the door at Wal-Mart.

We drove to the ritzier side of town and before she opened the front door, she warned me of her Old English bulldog who thought everyone who came to visit came to visit him. She opened the door and she hadn’t lied. He was a real friendly sort and I like my dogs like I like my coffee: all teeth and drool and a coat of fur.

She showed me her boudoir where the brooch disappeared and that’s when I noticed the dog wasn’t as lively as she had claimed it would be.

“Listen, lady,” I said. “I need fifty feet of plastic tubing, a yak, and a safety net, pronto.”

She stuck out that lower lip again. “I don’t have a safety net.”

“Then a long-handled wooden spoon will do and then you need to leave. There are things in this world a dame ain’t meant to see.”

An hour later I handed her back the brooch and her dog that looked like it had been dragged through a keyhole backwards. “You’ll want to wash your hands after handling that,” I said.

She batted her baby blues at me. “Would you care to stay for a cup of coffee?’ she asked and her eyes told me the creamer would be real stuff from the supermarket and not the artificial junk in those little plastic tubs you can never open right.

“Sorry, babe,” I said, as I flipped my fedora back on my head. “I never touch the stuff.”

THE END

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ladysaotome
Nov. 21st, 2013 03:47 pm (UTC)
Too, too funny. I really enjoyed it! And Gus the Pus Sucker sounds disgusting! I'm not surprised it resulted in concrete. But you've got me curious about this gunrunner in Singapore - sounds to me like this is a great opportunity for a series!
eric_hinkle
Nov. 22nd, 2013 02:18 am (UTC)
Oh brother. Now if you tried to sell this, it'd probably make a fortune. Five bucks at the very least! XD
cloudchaser_s
Nov. 22nd, 2013 07:22 am (UTC)
That was a nice enjoyable read! Thanks for posting!
u_t_tiger
Nov. 23rd, 2013 10:41 pm (UTC)
I like my women like I like my coffee: black & bold but with sugar for a sweet side.
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